my planning for my hundred word story!!!

Coin Operated LInk (watch)

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	It was the late afternoon and a boy and his mum were going for a walk down the street. The boy was raising along with his toy space ship, dragging his Mum along with him.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	Suddenly he sore a much bigger mushinen rocket, he sore that it cost money. He pulled out some of his own money and put it into the machine, jumped up on the rocket and put on his helmet and was ready to fly.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	The boy was expecting the rocket to fly into the sky and go to space. But all the rocket did was move around on the spot, slowly it came to a bumpy stop. The boy was so upset, he threw off his helmet, but he would not give up, he checked his pockets but no money came out, just then he sore a sine that said lemons and that gave him a great idea.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	The boy began to set up a lemonade stand. People began to come by the lemonade stand and began to get some. Days went bye weeks went bye, weeks turned into months, months turned into years until the boy was an old man.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	The man sighed but smiled. He picked up his life's worth of money and put up a sorry we're closed sign on his lemonade stand.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	Suddenly he sore the old rocket mishenin form when he was a boy and he was ready to try angen. He grabbed his big bag of money and tipped every last coin into the mushenie and jumped on to the rocket and was ready to fly. But nothing happened. He was so upset and he banged his fist on the rocket, but slowly some of the coins slipped into the musheine and, he blasted into the SKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!