writing

hello every body this is a some of my descriptive story writing so far I hope that you enjoy it.

what is your favourite sentence? blog you later bye!!

The grey ashy smoke drifted throughout the old creaky house. A very rich family lived there, but all of them were full of themselves if you ask me. As I drifted down the hall in a puff of smoke I noticed that there son was out of bed and raiding the cookie jar as you shawel.

In the kingdom of the hive wings we all have a tradition where the oldest wing-let in your family would fly out with the royal and get their sun mark! A sun mark is one wing-let at a time would fly straight into the sun, then it would burn them and they would get a MARK ekkkkkkk!!! I'm the only one in my family who hasn't got a sun mark. Later that day I sore all my brothers and sisters playing and laughing about each other's marks. (in my head): ‘’I wish that I had my mark so that I could